[RolePlay] Dynastian Splinters

((He he he. Pen said he was going with me strictly for profit... This gets me a profit.))

((No I didn't…))

((Scratch that. Sorry pen, that was hylian that said that.))

characters name: nazarth haith

Age: 20
affiliation: Aravians
companion: dog
starting city: Drogobak
Primary weapon: katarina ( a devilish swift blade )

Secondary weapon: chained blade
Supplies: 100 local money and his mask
Biography: he was raised by a couple of pesant travelers so from a young age he had to be swift on his feet to steal. by the time he was 16 he ventured on his own and people couldnt understand the motion of his blades but know knows what he can do. (hes unknown and mystirious)
Other: Quoth The Raven, Nevermore

Explain your Primary Weapon some more, but you made your character a little OP...

The guards burst through the door and the battle begins. Not even worrying about noise anymore I break out my pistols.

edited

I still believe you're making your character slightly OP.

why is he op
?

its not saying he killed them it saying they couldnt stand how fast he was

Exactly

I ready my switchblade and start remote controlling my spiders.

edited

Accepted

yay

as the unknown travler sat alone at the bar drinking the battle burst out behind him, he was still he didnt even look.

Ok but please try to use proper grammar.

ok

I see Terran Des get killed as I shoot my way out of the room. As I leave the rest to fight I go running after Quarven. Jak follows me.

as the empty glass hits the oak bar, a Revolutionarie drops to his knees with a chained blade sticking out his neck.