[FORUM GAME] GalliaRPG - Revived

(not too long, you were in the forest near it. probably about 30 minutes)
There is a large wall. You notice a bridge across the river running around the city.
(thank you for that last thing)

I practically fall down, glad to rest for a while. I look over to the tiger and fox "You guys can go, I doubt you'll get captured again here" but they just sat and stared at me "Fine, have it your way"
I cleared away quite a large circle to make a decent place for all of us to sleep

in the morning, we begin to move towards the city.

(I was hoping for a night scene, but alright)
"Sonaria?" I say "What's this city like?"

(SCRATCH THE THING)
I hear a rustling, and whispering. "Moni? is that you?"
I look and see Moni sleeping.
"Shit."
i whisper to Moni. "wake up"
"wake up"
"waaaake uppppp"

you see a wall in the distance.
they only seem to be coming from one side, and you could probably get to that wall without too much trouble.

I yawn "G.... Go away...." I sit up and rub my eyes "W-What's going on Soni?"

(That's your nickname, deal with it)

I prepare for a visitor, and tell him to shut his mouth.

It's funny how people can't change the story, but Alice can

"Wow, this looks like quite a big city. I better be prepared.. I'll probably mess up anyway though." I look for a way to get in.

((I don't change it much. I only really asked for a scene there instead of just skipping to morning. I do try and follow on from what Prince says

I meant it more like this for example.

Of course I don't mind, because it makes the story much more interesting.

(ERROR: COULD NOT DEAL WITH)
"There... are... people... shush"

you notice a path far away. the wall is made out of concrete.

as the visitor enters, you hear screaming and shouting.

(shush, i actually didn't notice that, and I usually notice when they change something that I had something planned)
There is a gate with a guard in front.

I get ready to attack

They come down holding a sword. "HELLO? WHO'S THERE?"

you see a guard stationed at a gate.

I say who are you people where am I and what am I doing here.

Character Name: Neve
Gender: Feminine
Race: Anima
Mortal: Light
Class: Beauty queen
City: Crescent Light
Appearance:

Human:
An RPG ver. of this


Alternative:

They don't answer your questions. They pull out guns, and tell you to put your hands above your head.

Beauty Queen isn't a class.
The Alternative image is broken.

I walk up to the gate. "Good <insert time of the day here>."

Guns? I use the man in front of me as a shield and ask the questions again and state that I mean no harm and that I woke up randomly in a crate.

(don't ask) "GET YOUR HANDS. ON YOUR HEAD."

I put my hands on my head and say, "Ok! Ok! Chill out man!