Writing has begun! However I am still needing surveys filled out! Thank you to everyone who has filled out a survey so far!
Everyone...chapter 1 is completed. I am anxious to see what everyone will think of it. Normally i have a proofreader for this sort of thing, but my usual proofreader for stuff like this has other things he is doing at the moment >_< I have put it in the post below the OP..... Don't rip on me if you hate it.
No thank you I need to work on getting better at that stuff myself anyway. This will be a good way for me to do that.
I read the story. Less semicolon abuse, but a few other types of errors. Surprisingly, less errors than normal. When errors did appear, they were more noticeable. Seeing as you want to get better for yourself, however, I won't point out specific instances unless you ask.
Oh, yes you can. i don't see why not? Like i said, i'm trying to get better. So please do point them out to me.
Chapter two has begun Fill out that survey people, every one counts For those of you who have not read the first chapter, it is in the post below the OP
Chapter 2 is up! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T8FkpGEQVw9u8z3jxTWnBS_ahQAh35aqBFremHfLiyA/edit?usp=sharing I have also placed the link in the post below the OP!
