some random writings ill never finish and poems from long past

Discussion in 'Writers' Corner' started by bitemenow15, Dec 15, 2014.

  1. here's a little hook about a girl we know
    left me again about an hour or so
    insipid meetups all tangled in woe
    should of forgot her a long time ago

    I'm sick of stories telling what I wanna hear
    this same one you hit me with last year
    cant keep em straight, your not gonna last here
    principles, you don't got a lot dear.

    It's time to move on, move out and just move
    cause no masseuse is gonna adjust you
    how could anybody really think to trust you
    oh man you must think we're all just fools

    i hate the time ive wasted so many years stung
    walking the streets hustling with my head hung
    everyone else knew i was being dumb
    well good now we are so DONE
  2. a wordless voice whispers dark things in his ear.
    never abating stating the things he fears.
    trapped in a nightmare the darkness unfolding.
    wheres the solace in a spiritual unmoulding?
    where lies the sublime in a warriors lament?
    and who tells the story of an arrow, spent?
    how does one explain a woman so rare?
    all that remains is her smell on a bear.
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  3. pages pages so many pages,
    being so pointless lets make this painless.
    if humpty dumpty sat on a wall,
    i guess humpty had some big balls.
    we all have our share of big falls.
    we've all walked through hallowed halls.
    Trials? yeah i know them all
    getting through them don't make you raw.
    the most trustworthy car will stall
    these pages i keep turning
    like the books the church was burning,
    its over in the morning
    but that leaves people mourning.
    much fewer leave yearning.
    but many keep returning
    some of y'all still learning
    instead i just keep Sisyphus
    up a hill ridiculous,
    at times i just remember us,
    then hide under promiscuous
    the tide has such a gentle touch
    when riled the water tends to rush
    a child and your all ants to crush
    but I've become mild so ill recede and hush.

    a rap i did a few years ago
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  4. light is trickling
    a leaking pipe,
    the darkness
    slinks and drains away
    the water rises
    slowly comes the break of day
    suddenly dams break
    the light rushes in
    brilliance awakens me
    yet i drown in light
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  5. Nice verses