Poems!!

Discussion in 'Writers' Corner' started by FluffeMarshmallo, Apr 4, 2017.

  1. Okay so I've started to write poems.
    They are mostly nonsense and are broken up weirdly.
    I have no one else to share these with.
    Thanks.

    So it all started with this:
    Lotion
    It makes your hands soft
    And moist
    And nice
    And nice to hold
    And nice to look at
    Lotion

    Fish
    They swim
    And are pretty
    And are shiny
    Many colors
    Such swim
    Fish

    (I started to make insulting ones... sorry)
    Garbage
    Has a lot
    Of similar qualities
    To you
    It's kind of funny
    Actually

    Ice
    Basically
    It pulls everything good in the world inside
    And then
    Spits it out
    Cold
    As
    Ice
    Just like you

    Lettuce
    Is green
    And crunchy
    Yum
    Lettuce

    May post more later if I ever get back into a poemy mood.

    Edit:
    I almost forgot this one:
    Soap
    It is weird
    It smells good
    Like food
    Like flowers
    But do not eat soap
    Soap
    Is
    Not
    Edible
    Yuck
    Soap
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  2. This made me cry because it's so beautiful :')

    Very deep and moving. Please write more.
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  3. Not pretty enough.
    Not smart enough.
    Not talented enough.
    Not skinny enough.
    Not tall enough.
    Not funny enough.
    Not nice enough.
    Not likable enough.
    Not attractive enough.
    Never good enough.
    Not for herself.
    Not for him.

    Not for anyone.
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  4. The ones at the OP were quite funny to read actually, but that latest one is kinda yikes , it is so negative D:! I like the shiney fish soap lotion letuce :D!
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  5. Sorry, here's another negative one. Will try to make some nonsense ones later.

    They don't know how much she is broken
    They don't know how much she cries
    They'll never understand
    How hard she really tries

    They tell her that she's stupid
    That she should try her best
    But with all the pressure on her
    She's never been so stressed

    She lies awake at night
    Trying to forget
    The mean things that they say to her
    When she already felt so upset

    She compares herself to everyone
    But no one else can see
    Because no one else bothers to ask her
    If she needs help before she tries to flee

    No one will understand her
    She's broken beyond repair
    But maybe if you'd helped her earlier
    She wouldn't be in so much despair
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