Thought I'd Share Somethin' Fun of A Poem Called "Rain"

Discussion in 'Writers' Corner' started by Aoi_Kaigara, Dec 2, 2019.

  1. Aoi_Kaigara's "Rain"

    I wish I was rain.
    So I could touch someone’s skin,
    And feel what they feel.


    I wish I was rain.
    The soothing sound of its voice
    Calls for one to play.
    I wish I was rain.
    The soothing touch as it falls
    On top of my face.
    I wish I was rain.
    As it touches my own skin
    And feels what I feel.


    I wish I was rain.
    So I could fall in puddles
    And make a large flood.
    I wish I was rain.
    So my flood could wash away
    The fears of children.
    I wish I was rain.
    So the children play with me.
    Play in my puddles.


    I wish I was rain.
    A rainbow could form from me
    ...And a bit of light.
    I wish I was rain.
    I could get along with light
    And form a beauty.
    I wish I was rain.
    In movies it’s a sad sight.
    A real life beauty.
    I wish I was rain.
    To satisfy movie scenes.
    A sense of feeling.
    I wish I was rain.
    As I would fall from the clouds,
    I’d watch the world.
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  2. Im Speechless :eek:
  3. Pretty cool. :)
    A subject I have not seen addressed before by poetry or prose. But I like it! :)
  4. I like how each stanza is centered differently its unique:)
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  5. Thanks!
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