Just a little poem i came up with :)

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by KingofKraft13, Aug 29, 2012.


Did you like the poem be honest it won't hurt my feelings :)

Yes 13 vote(s) 100.0%
No 0 vote(s) 0.0%
  1. "I live my life for you.
    As long as you're happy, I am to.
    I live my life to make you smile.
    Because before me i know it's been a while.
    I live my life with no regret.
    I live my life to not forget.
    I can never forget the way you are
    When you are near or you are far.
    So hold me close to your heart.
    Promise me we'll never fall apart.
    I have loved you from the very start."
    -Kingofkraft13 aka Victor A Moreno
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  2. Very nice is this the first poem you've made ?
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  3. No i have made alot before but I've slowed down. and thanks :)
  4. Whats her name?
  5. I didn't make specifically for anybody, I just made it for all the love birds out there :)
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  6. If

    If you can keep your head when all about you
    Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;
    If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
    But make allowance for their doubting too:
    If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
    Or, being lied about, don't deal in lies,
    Or being hated don't give way to hating,
    And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise;

    If you can dream---and not make dreams your master;
    If you can think---and not make thoughts your aim,
    If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
    And treat those two impostors just the same:.
    If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
    Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
    Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
    And stoop and build'em up with worn-out tools;

    If you can make one heap of all your winnings
    And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
    And lose, and start again at your beginnings,
    And never breathe a word about your loss:
    If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
    To serve your turn long after they are gone,
    And so hold on when there is nothing in you
    Except the Will which says to them: "Hold on!"

    If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
    Or walk with Kings---nor lose the common touch,
    If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you,
    If all men count with you, but none too much:
    If you can fill the unforgiving minute
    With sixty seconds' worth of distance run,
    Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
    And---which is more---you'll be a Man, my son!
    Rudyard Kipling
    I know that you know this poem. This is my all time favorite
  7. That was so, so sooo beautiful.:oops:

    Who needs cash, just write some poems to girls and you got succes $$$
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  8. The best way to get a great woman is to grab a hold of her with the magic of your words :)
  9. And ofcourse to make her laugh, they no want no fun guys =P

    Ps, I might steal this haha :D
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  10. lol Go ahead and yes funny is part of the magic ;)
  11. Oh yeah so it isn't for me :(
  12. umm Were the same person but your just a girl version lol weirdo -_-
  13. what happened to me after reading that P.S. mindception
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  14. lol i knew they were the same person man how many are there?.....
  15. I think it's good anyway.
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  16. That poem sincerely touched my heart King. Very nice.

    I have my own poem, but its just for laughs! :p
    Roses are red!
    Violets are blue!
    I gotta gun!
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  17. Thank you sir.
  18. lol thanks and i like that poem or are you being serious?!
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  19. Here's a favorite of mine, it is a love poem actually:
    roses are #FF0000
    violets are #0000FF
    all my base
    are belong to you
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  20. Haha no, I have another one, but it is slighty " Not for kids ".